Where to ask for driving advice?

Hello. I'm just wondering if there a specific place to maybe post a video and ask for tips on how to improve your driving? I am driving the Lotus Exos 125 at Monza, and no matter what I do, I can't seem to get my time below a 1.40. I'm looking at the you tube videos and seeing people do 1.33's and just cant copy them. I can see mistakes in my replays but when I iron them out the times don't improve. Would someone mind having a look and see what I'm doing wrong? You can tell me I'm crap if I really am because I know that, I just want to improve. Thanks for reading!

Edit- Just to say I'm using a g27 wheel and pedals.

 

I think you were looking at exos s1 videos. This is the standard exos.

 

Your enter corners unbalanced, causing the car to understeer. On the exit, you use too much throttle too soon or too late and cause the car to understeer. Between the chicanes, you don't stab the throttle to 100% for just a bit, easily saving a third of a second just in the chicane. The car wobbles everywhere on braking and you don't trail brake deep enough. You don't use the whole track on the entry and exit. Instead of entering immediately, you "creep" the car towards the middle of the track then enter, making your cornering speed limit artificially low, never getting into the 1s range from the WR whatever you do, ever.

 

You need to be more agressive on brakes,braking too early..
Also you dance to much on straights , how much degrees you using?

 

I don't drive this car, but nobody should need to tell you what you're doing wrong - it's all there in the vid very clearly.
Apart from what people have already said - look at your exit of Ascari and Parabolica - you can see that you're leaving lots of room un-used on the exit, but then letting the steering out. The car needs to be exiting at a speed where you end up on the outside kerb naturally due to carrying speed, not because you've steered outwards after going through slower than is possible. It needs to feel like you're at the limit everywhere to be a fast lap.
Hope you can see what I mean.

 

Chances are, you're doing it wrong because you don't know what you are doing wrong

 

Increase FFB, decrease FOV.

 

Sorry I think I said it wrong. Today I was hot lapping at monza using the exos t125 (not s1), and the 1st record was 1.33.something.

But still, youtube videos or best lap times were made in older game versions, now since v1.0 that brought changes to physics/tyre model, lap times are slower than they used to be. They resemble even more lap times done with the real car on the real track.